Saturday, July 31, 2010

Bidesha - 2

Along the lines of what I had written earlier on Bidesha-1, here is another thought...

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11 comments:

Santosh Kumar said...

good.this is the reality u have written in ur poem.thyme is attractive.the satire behind the poem is too nice.wish u a glittering creativity.

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Arun said...

I liked this poem...I do write ODIYA poems in my off hours...you may drop in @ lulucreations.blogspot.com

Manoranjan Mudra said...

badhia heichi nani.Keep it up !!!!!

Manoranjan Mudra said...

Badia heichi nani.Keep it up !!!!!

Abinash Karan said...

Liked the creation of nothing-ness.

sailendra patra said...

i liked it. keep up the good work.keep writing .people like u take us to our roots.
--- your immediate senior in UCE , Burla

S Mishra said...

WOW! very nice... upasthapana saili chamatkar!

Unknown said...

The author has elaborated the negative side of it. Who knows the mother had all the sleepless night after night making tea or coffee and of course kakara pitha through out the night so that her son should not face any difficulties in studies and make everything comfortable for her son as possible as she can at the cost of her own comfort and help him to meet his goal. Now it is her party time so that she is. The frustrated mindset who did nothing significant in their entire life perhaps should brazenly criticize others and die one day unnoticeable.