Juddhha sabhieein laddhanti, hele kie kipari bhabare. Kintu nijara jibanara juddhare jitibaa paain, anyara jibana nebata kana jathaartha ? Ketebele? Kemiti janibaa kie thik karuchhi aau kie bhool? Sabhya manusya kana tara sathika uttara tie khojiki paichhi ? Esabu prasnaru janma neichhi ehi kabitati.
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10 comments:
Very Nice...
Jagadish
Very nice..
-Jagadish
time lageiki padhili..jete bujhili .it really makes you think !! So many things which we ignore in our hustle bustle life...
Fantastic Bijayalaxmi.I have no word to explain you how nice it is.
"Bahut dina pare kehijane milile jibanara pratikhyan ku banchila bhali anubhabi manisa tie. Karmamaya jiban bhitare mu bhuli jaithili amara asthityo ODIYA SAHITYA ku"
THANKS LOT FOR YOUR DEPTH.
SUCHETA
Nani
bahut dina pare padhili bhala oriya poem te khusi lagila
Luzun
Good work Bijaya!!
Nani
Namskar Kabita ta padhi bahuta khusi lagia je Odissa ru ete dura re rahi bhi tame ete odiya sahitya ra gabhira tare achha .
spelling mistake prati tike dhyan debaku anurodh.puni sei gotie katha kahibi, belebele kichhi khapchhada sabda pain kabita pathak ku jatil karideuchhi.kintu ei kabitara antaswar khub gote bandhi rakhiba bhali.dhanyabad.
Hi BijayLaxmi,
I have gone through your all poems in the blog. It was really wonderful.
My cordial thanks to you for writing.
Thanks
Ram
loved all ur poems.bahut badhia lekucha. hats off to you that you take out some time to write such poems. keep it up.will love to read more of your poems
==sailendra patra.96 uce
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